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Jonathan Langsam
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i found your photos yesterday
how long it's been
still fresh and new
you wore my shirt
ten thousand days
to think of you
in jade and all the other things
each day

and dreamed of you again last night
so vividly
you held me while we slept
and said this time
we'd take it slower now

remember how you squeezed
and found a rock
one day and smiled
and said "let's go"
and then

i wonder how your life has been and

why i was afraid to ask
of you
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Tue Jan 24, 2012, 8:27 PM
It's been a while since I've felt like writing anything. Or feeling much of anything, or doing anything worth writing about. Or even answering feedback or browsing my deviantART watch.

But this morning I woke up from an incredible dream, one of those long, complicated, intensely joyful and realistic things that make you want to go on sleeping and dreaming forever.

And in that half state between asleep and awake, the words of it started coming to me, and I realized I was having a poem.

So I wrote it down, since I couldn't go back to sleep.

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~Ronnie4Renegade Feb 18, 2011
Did you see the amazing sky last night? I could have walked the dog forever and looked up the whole time!
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*langsam Mar 26, 2011
Was that the eclipse of the moon? I saw it and now wish I'd taken the trouble to get a photo of it. Or actually, that I understood my camera a little better, because it would have been hard to get, the light was so low.

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...there is a very significant body of evidence indicating that the hot big bang model is a useful approximation to the real world. - P. J. E. Peebles, in Principles of Physical Cosmology(p.7)
-- Don't we all know it.
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~Ronnie4Renegade Mar 29, 2011
I missed the eclipse. I was playing video games with your son at the time. This was a full moon night.
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*langsam Apr 6, 2011
hhhhmmmmmppppphhhhhh. Tell Tom he has to quote me to you about all that until you get real bored.

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...there is a very significant body of evidence indicating that the hot big bang model is a useful approximation to the real world. - P. J. E. Peebles, in Principles of Physical Cosmology(p.7)
-- Don't we all know it.
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Mood: Overwhelmed ~renegade4dio Feb 17, 2011
Egads! What an ugly old man! If I looked anything like you, I might just have to end it all!

I seem to remember being told to sign up for DA several years back, and I never got around to it. And the first Deviant I look at is you? What was I thinking... my father would probably say I wasn't...
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~Ronnie4Renegade Feb 18, 2011
Please don't end it all! I happen to think you both are adorable. You are both amazing human beings, shut the f*@% up!
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~renegade4dio Feb 18, 2011
:P lol, OK, so maybe I was joking just a little....
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~Ronnie4Renegade Feb 18, 2011
Well duh! I love you.
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~FallenKitten21 Aug 20, 2010
Thank you for watching me but can I ask what drove you to m ask such a decision?

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Not to say you say too much
Just to say it's time to shush

Not to give you reason to go
But heres the broom and theres the door

*creepy half scream*

~SlimClub

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*langsam Aug 20, 2010
I don't remember. Probably you showed up on my visitors list and I wasn't too busy to check your page and then found something I liked, at least enough to want to come back someday and check out your gallery. I don't remember if I left you any comments or faved anything. I've been pretty busy lately.

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...there is a very significant body of evidence indicating that the hot big bang model is a useful approximation to the real world. - P. J. E. Peebles, in Principles of Physical Cosmology(p.7)
-- Don't we all know it.
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